Kitchen
A short challenge piece from my creative writing course.
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The door
of the shack clanged shut with an echo that caused Maxwell to fly into a
passing moment of panic. He coddled the bundle of ingredients in his arms with
the care of a new mother. Five minutes passed in silence. The old man’s aching
bones stood firm as he listened carefully for the wail of sirens. Tired,
ancient lungs struggled to hold in their breath. A soft whistle from the draft
in the door rustled his greying auburn locks. Nought but a spider skittered
across the dirt floor. Once those five minutes were up, Maxwell felt
comfortable enough to utter a sigh of relief.
Treading
lightly, a sliver of paranoia from the panic still haunting him, Maxwell
shuffled across the floor in worn through boots to the kitchen counter. At
least, that’s what he considered it. The shack itself was only one room.
Crumbling brick walls, no floor, a single unwashed mattress. Yet, the two counter-tops and the gas-lit oven proudly sat in pristine condition. Maxwell’s
only pride and joy left in the desolation he lived. Unwrapping the bundle, the
old man gently placed the ingredients one by one on the counter. An onion, a
carrot, a lightly crushed stock cube and a sprinkling of unknown herbs sealed
tight in a plastic wallet. All were set on the counter aside the one currently
hosting the somewhat fresh carcass of a chicken. Maxwell beamed at the display
before him, though his expression quickly jumped to surprise. Mouthing insults
to his deteriorating memory, he hurriedly exited the shack once again. Within a
minute he returned with a cooking pot, filled to the brim with rainwater. Positioning
it atop the hob of the oven, Maxwell beamed once again. Curious excitement
enveloped his being as he endeavoured to begin meal preparations.
Aeons of
expertise guided his hands.
As swiftly
as elderly fingers could manage, Maxwell retrieved the knife he kept upon his
person. Through thuds and scrapes, the onion and the carrot were severed into
bitesize slices. The chicken carcass offered itself up in sacrifice of the
trying times to the cooking pot, adorned by vegetables and glittering with the
sprinkle of stock cube and mystery herbs. Sparking up the controlled flames,
Maxwell’s concoction bubbled into a frothing frenzy. The sound of it blended
with the growing rain outside. As a professional might, he took the opportunity
to cautiously to crack the door open to stick out his hands for a quick wash.
Returning to his post, Maxwell lowered the heat. Gingerly, he reached inside
the pot to remove the bones from the mix. He would bury those later. The heat
of the liquid did not cause much of a bother throughout this; the sensation of
pain had become lost to time and travel long ago. Once finished, he turned up
the heat again for the final stretch.
Amidst the
waiting, Maxwell let his eyes rest and his mind wander. Behind the closed
eyelids, the world around him brightened.
He could
hear remarks of amazement. He could smell the amalgamation of gourmet delights.
Bright lights, bright smiles, bright people.
But now?
A dark
shack, dark frowns, dark world.
Maxwell
didn’t care.
The little
slice of his old life simmering below his nose was enough. His attention was
alerted back to reality by the aroma of completion. Scrabbling around the
countertop for the cutlery, Maxwell retrieved an old, yet polished spoon. With
a single scoop and a slurp, he was met with a taste that brought to mind a
homely nostalgia of mother’s stew with a new and very welcome mystery twist.
Another new
flavour for the memory banks, he thought to himself.
One step
closer to dying happy.
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